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sabca879

ahojte... viem že to sem asi veľmi nepatrí ale potrebuje pomocť opraviť chyby v tomto texte : nejde mi o obsah len o gramatiku. prosím zabierie to chíľočku ďakujem.
Many people say that money aren´t everything. I agree with that. But i still think that money are important. People say that you can´t buy health by money. I think it´s true. But sometimes they make your healt better.
If you have a lot of money, you can buy healthier food, you can pay for special surgeon and many other things.
But you can´t buy love by money. All the world´s money can´t give you love.
They can´t give you luck too.
Love, luck and many important thing, money just can´t give you.
Money give you good feeling. You know, that tomorrow you could buy some food. With money you know that tommorrow you will wake up in your bed and can turn on the lamp.
Sometimes with money life is better. It´s fun when on friday you can go to the bar and can buy some drink and snacks. It´s good feeling when you buy some new clothes or new electornic . Money make you feel better, but money are still not everything.

nili

Money is nie money are.
You cannot "prefer opinion".
Some people would say that you can´t buy your health for money. Ked napises buy, tak to je uz v tom dane, ze za peniaze. Nemusis tam pisat "for money".
Love, which very needed for happiness. To co je?

Nechce sa mi v tom uz dalej hrabat, je potrebne to kompletne prerobit, mnohe veci sa tak v anglictine nepovedia, ako to mas napisane ty a slovosled taktiez pokrivkava. Okrem toho, ked to ma byt esej, nesplna pravidla eseje.

uhlie

Many people say that money is not everything. I may agree with them, but i still think that it is important to have it. People say that you can´t buy health for money. I think it´s true. But sometimes they make your health better.

If you got a lot of money, you can buy healthier food, pay more for better surgeon and many other things as well.

But you can´t buy love for money. All the world´s money can´t pay love for you.

Neither they can make you happy.

Love, happines and many other important things, money just can´t give you.

Money make you feel good. You know, that tomorrow you may buy some food. With money you know that tommorrow you will wake up in your bed and can turn on the light.

Sometimes, having money means better life. It´s fun if you can go to the bar on friday and buy some drink and snacks. It´s good feeling when you buy some new clothes or new electornic stuff . Money make you feel better, but money is still not everything.

ivkka

ahojte mohol by mi niekto pomoct s tymto? opravit chyby lebo asi tam bude zla gramatika dakujeeem..................

In the world of 2010, there are still huge differeces between rich and poor, developed and less developed countries. But why? Who is to blame? What can we do about it? Many things have been tried out to solve these problems, but does it work?

It seems bizarre, that we, modern, intelligent people, have not yet succeded to get rid of the differences between developed countries and less developed countries.
There are many organizations which tried to help less developed countries.For example OSN,which provide aid in the sphere of foodstuff, military aid and medical assistance. They have many volunteers,who are determined to help in every sense. I think that it is possible to hepl these countries anywhere near. In my opinion these differences will never be removed because in these countries lives so many people and it is impossible to hepl all people. Such as the earthqvake in Haiti. Many countries promises aid but while volunteers will come in Haiti is late. Even our republic wants to send rescuers to help casualty people.

sabca879

ďakujem ďakujem ďakujem ďakujem ďakujem milionkrát:D je to super! :D a toto stačí:) malo to byť 15-20 viet:)

nooooo

Many people would say about money that they aren´t everything. I do agree with this, but I still prefer opinion that money are very important. Some people would say that you can´t buy your health for money. I think that it´s true. But sometimes, they can improve your health.

If you have a lot of money, you can buy healthier food, do many special sports, you can pay for better medicine specialist when you are ill and buy many other things, important for comfortable,healthy life.

But you can´t buy love for money. All the world´s money can´t give you love. Love, which very needed for happiness.

They can´t give you happiness too.
You also cannot buy real friends. You may buy cat or dog, but not his or her love and respect. And the same is this with people.

Love, happiness, health and many others important things, money just can´t give you.

Money can give you good feeling. You can be sure, that tomorrow you could buy some food, and dont suffer for hunger. With money you know that tommorrow you will wake up in your bed and can turn on your lamp.

Sometimes with money life is better. It´s fun when on Friday you can go to the bar and can buy some drink and snacks. It´s good feeling when you buy some new clothes or new electronic . Money can make you feel better, but money are still not everything.

...ešte by si to mala dosť vyladiť, je tam toho málo, príliš krátke, slabo rozvinuté

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